✍️ Write based on the line prompt above

Posted 6 years, 9 months ago (Edited 5 years, 4 months ago) by Caine

This game is very similar to Respond to the prompt above you. In this game, however, the prompts are random lines, such as "What do you think you're doing?" and "Do you need help?" instead of questions or scenarios.
Your response should be in the form of short story / flash fiction! 

How it works:

  1. Claim your post so you won't get ninja'd! It'd suck to lose all the writing you did just because someone wrote & posted faster than you!
  2. Edit your post and respond to the line given to you. You need to include the line in your story, but otherwise you have free hands to interpret it as you like. The response should be in the form of short story / flash fiction.
  3. At the end of your post, make sure to give the next person a line as well! Make sure the line is not too specific or restricting so the thread won't get stuck.

Rules:

  • Keep it PG13!
  • Use the spoiler function if your post is very long! It'll be easier for others to scroll down if they aren't met with a wall of text
  • Make sure to post IC so people will know which character you're using in the prompt & they can potentially check it out!
  • YOU CAN RESPOND AS MANY TIMES AS YOU LIKE like you don't need to wait for a certain amount of people to reply until you're allowed to.
  • Honestly this thread is so dead that anarchy reigns and if you don't fill your claim it's not the end of the world, as long as you provide a line for the next user 

Example:

Line: "What do we have here?"

Reply: "What do we have here?" the man asked with a repulsive smile on his face. He had tied Xavier up while he was unconscious, and was now pointing at him with a supposedly loaded gun - Xavier had no intentions to take a risk and believe the gun was fake. "Not so smart anymore, huh? Looks like foxes aren't all that clever after all!"

"I'm not a fox!" Xavier hissed.

"That should be the least of your concerns right now, given your current situation," the man laughed, but his gun was still pointing at the detective.



Here is a line for the first:

"I'm never going to do that again, I swear!"

STAR3XIAN

Includes another character: El condor 

My purpose in life was to make someone happy but I never thought of making humans happy, on such a large scale. when I was becoming who I am, I angered many SLC's by just being who I want to be. I remember seeing the pilot who started the SLC craze. I never understood how such a bad coaster model could sell nearly over 40 times. 

I remember being in the Vekoma ride manufacturing workshops, I had nothing to do but wait until they send me out to tripsdrill. I was so excited I couldn't hold my excitement with seeing Kracho and my brother again.

I sat there for good an hour before I heard soft footsteps. I tried to ignore them thinking it was some random rollercoaster pilot coming to get spare parts for their ride. I looked down onto my virtual coaster, texting my brother Volldampf telling him that I will be there soon. I sighed. I saw paws standing there. I looked up. My breath was gone. I couldn't believe who stood there. It was El condor. Yes, that El condor. The Walibi holland Chamo was being praised for starting a whole war without knowing it. I swear to see him made me anxious. He didn't like me nor did he like the fact of me being called a "Modern SLC". A Vekoma STC is nothing more than the better version of his failed coaster model series. I was lucky as a Chamo to also be the first coaster model. Usually, coaster pilots laughed at Chamo pilots, saying we weren't capable of leading a whole model species. I disagree with everything those coaster pilots say. I was capable of doing that. I didn't know what El condor wanted. I put my virtual coaster device away. I stood up to look into his face.

"I thought I'd never see you again!" 

I said in a very serious voice. I tried to give him a smile. I didn't want to be rude after all I have to thank him somewhat.

"I also thought I'd never see you again. I assume you wait for people to take you to your coaster?" 

El condor said to me. He had an unamused face. He was looking at his nails. Even tho he was wearing gloves.

"Well yeah...I was told to just wait here. But say what brings you here?" 

I asked. I was curious as to why he was showing up here. 

"Spare parts. I need new wheels. My old ones broke" 

El condor replied. He turned away from me.

"Anyway...have fun waiting I guess..."

El condor said. He sounded rather petty to me. He didn't like me it was clear.

I shrugged. I sat back down and looked onto my virtual coaster device. Seeing that the time was passing by like crazy. I feel like that talk with El condor slowed it down. I felt a hand on my shoulder soon. It was the guy who should take me to tripsdrill. Finally, I was getting away from the Vekoma workshops.


"A Twisted perception of the world"

Picasso Bucciarati Narancia

claim!

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For the next person in case you're faster than me:

"Some things? Only God can forgive."

En Litari II ([BrokEn AU]) PicklePantry

It's pretty bloody so it's under a spoiler!

SWIIING!!

Down went the two guards. Their guns, sliced in half, fell with them, right on top of the blood pooling below.
The siren, a rich, government worker in this side of the city, fell to his rear with a yelp of fear. He scrambled backwards until his back hit his desk. Glasses fell askew across his face as wide, panicked eyes stared up helplessly at his assailant: the former prince of the kingdom.
"P-Please," begged the breathless siren, "Y-You don't have to do this! I was wrong! Okay? I was wrong! Y-You're not useless-- Definitely not! You're a-a wonderful leader! Yes!"
En's expression didn't change, nor did they leave the man's face. He took another step towards him, holding both his swords close to his sides, both blades dripping with blood.
"Please!!!" the siren cried. "I'm-I'm sorry! I'm sorry, I didn't mean to be so harsh on you!" Seeing no change, he began to sob, "I have a family--"

SWIIING!!

The prince assassin left before reinforcements came.
Among the tragic sight was a letter that rested comfortably on the former official's lap.

"Some things only God can forgive."

"I won't do it again, I swear!"

Sienna PolarisStorm

It's probably easier if I link it.


"What do you mean, you lost it?!"

 Rosanna "Rose" Fennel rattieberry

(Spoilered for mention of injuries and weapon use + some pretty murderous implications)

"What do you mean, you lost it?!"

Rose lurched back. The other hunter, Lily- why does Rose remember that?- waved an accusatory knife. She was still dirt-stained and bloody, bandages up her arms and legs. Anywhere else, parents would despair at their eighteen-year-old in such a state. But not here. Not with the mission they had.

"I- I lost it." Rose repeated, lying straight through her teeth. "It was too fast, and I lost it."

If she told Lily she let the beast go, that she saw humanity in that monster's eyes, she would never see the light of day again. Disgust sat uncomfortably in her stomach. A lifetime of teachings, and, in that moment, something terrible possessed her.

"Why did they put you on lookout anyway?" The girl frowned and crossed her arms. "You're not supposed to hunt until you're 16. Aren't you 15?"

"I'm 16 next week," Rose replied. "Mom let me shadow." Honestly, she preferred Lily to her mother, who, Givers grace, she was terrified to see after this.

She rolled her eyes. "Whatever," she huffed. "Just don't do it again."

The week after, Lily left town. Somewhere in her, Rose wished she could've told her all that happened. The blonde-haired Weeder she knew nothing past the scathing words, gone on the monster hunt gone wrong. She could tell her all about the shaking hands, the gasps for air, the BANG of a silver bullet from a gun. The deep pit of emptiness that plumed inside her chest, that, a lifetime later, had refused to leave. She knew better now, didn't she?

So if she's still out there, and if it still counts for anything: No, Lily. Rose didn't do it again.

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"Don't you ever get tired of being nice?"

Alciel Sadame kabuto

-- dynamiteGambler [DG] began pestering jovialLuminary [JL] at 12:15 --


DG: >dont you ever get tired of being nice

DG: >dont you just want to go apeshit

JL: No actually i quite enjoy it!!!!

JL: Maybe you 5hould give a try 5ometime!!!!!!!! :D

DG: >no thanks

DG: >i mean

DG: >its not really my kind of thing

DG: >my charming character quality is being an abrasive asshole

DG: >but like one who cares for his friends deep down

JL: "Charming". 5ure!

DG: >that wasnt very nice

DG: >are you perhaps going apeshit like i suggested

JL: I'm 5orry that wa5 really mean of me now that I look back on it! :(

DG: >and here i thought i was making progress on turning you into a bully like me

JL: Nooooooooooooooo!!!

DG: >it was worth a shot


-- dynamiteGambler [DG] ceased pestering jovialLuminary [JL] --


"Even if the world does not forgive you, I will forgive you."

Saffron salternate

"I know you're upset, my dear," Saffron began, heaving out an exhale as she strutted along the room. She cautiously examined the dark-pelted tom seated at his desk; albeit his mouth being obscured by his scarf, she could still tell that he was upset through his quavering eyelids.

"However, this was something that has been going on for ages. Out of all the times, why now?"

"It's not fair, mommy," Clyde spat, narrowing his eyes at his laptop. The young adult stretched his hands, allowing his lips to curl into a larger frown.

"Twenty-eight years, mom. It's been twenty-eight years and you and dad are still getting hate. All because you two are in love. Doesn't that make you angry? Doesn't that make you want to just... explode at someone? If I were in your shoes, I definitely would have."

After Clyde finished speaking, Saffron sashayed over to him. She stared at his fingers, which were clicking away at the keyboard. After the elder party paused to think, she brushed a paw underneath her jaw.

"Clyde, it's okay. Let me do the worrying for all of us. I cannot even forgive myself for the horrors we all went through."

"Look, mom. I bet everyone else still doesn't want to adjust to change. However, I need you to know one thing: Even if the world does not forgive you, I will forgive you. Penny's death wasn't your fault—everything that happened to me wasn't your fault. I have the right to worry about you, mom."

After the younger party finished speaking, Saffron raised her eyebrows. She didn't know what to say nor did she know what to do. She just stood in stunned silence. Eventually, the middle-aged molly would begrudgingly grunt,

"Thank you, Clyde."

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"You're blushing! You totally are!"

zinnia

anyways heres the cheesiest gotdam thing i could muster in less than an hour goodnight

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"...would that be messed up or what?"

Reserved: Ciyabloodland-Jaden Carnage

"What if I actually act the way I was intended to act?" Flint speaks out, Quinten looks at him with wide eyes full of worry. The dragonling was on the ground, hands tied behind him, he had just knew this angry male for three hours but already the boy knew that Flint wasn't okay. 

"What do you mean?" Quinten shakily asks, he was scared to know the answer but even more terrified not knowing. What if Flint does something crazy to himself?

"I'm a weapon, that's all I am." Flint whispers, "What happens when I snap? When I can't take it anymore?" A grin grows on his face. "What if I act like how they intended me to be, as a damn weapon? What if I torture them instead? Force them to feel like their body is on fire, just like they made me do to countless people before my 'masters' killed em." Flint runs his fingers through his hair, hot tears running down his cheeks and he turns to Quinten.

"Flint-" Quinten begins, eyes widening more and his heart starts to beat faster in his chest when he sees that the boy's blindfold was starting to get loose.

"I wouldn't need to torture and kill people for them anymore, I would be free." Flint whispers, "All I need to do is snap a couple necks, burn a couple tents..." Now Quinten could see one eye, the blindfold slowly slipping off and already he felt like flame was licking at him. "....would that be messed up or what?" Flint murmurs, he sounded sad, knowing that he could never do that. That he was always going to just be property. 


"What do you MEAN you took a wrong turn?! You-...wait a minute, it wasn't a wrong turn was it? For you at least..." 

Lufuu

Claim~

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"Listen...you mean the world and more to me, but...I can't."

kabuto

claim


"There’s only one difference between heroes and mad men. It’s whether they win or lose."

 Konstantin Veliki (Avenger) Ledokol

          Written from Konstantin's pov, featured Dyugur and mentioned Yaroslav, Mstislav and Igor.

          Today, once again, I needed to obliterate the 'Rurik Clowns' trio with Chi-Rho Invictus because they just never gave up on harassing this boy assigned as our 'master'. How many times before they learn? I thought I let out a glaring clue to Yaroslav and Mstislav already. Hmph, it seems… the word 'Mongol' alone is more than enough to reset their intelligence. Or the lack thereof…

          Inside my own room within this 'Chaldea' base, this boy from Far East sat wide-eyed. There was nothing special about it. And that was precisely what astounded him. As a former Roman emperor, he placed a heavy doubt on how could I find this cramped, barren space acceptable. Ho. If only he ever saw Naissus in my childhood. Sure, before leaving the 'throne' and materializing as this servant form I was an emperor, but during the Crisis period of the Third Century I was born in, to form a successive lineage as father-son emperors was a high privilege. Lots of 'emperors' back then were usurpers, men of common roots. History might have recorded that I'm a son of an emperor, yet my father was elevated to such a position when I was well over twenty years old.

          “I learn little regarding Roman history in school,” confessed the young man from the region I never knew existed back in the 4th century. “At least, I do know though that you and Nero lived hundreds of years apart. What's your opinion? Did the Roman historians sway your view far out of the truth?”

          'Truth' implied here meant… the Nero presented in Chaldea as a fellow servant. So far we never cooperated.

          My body was leaning to the door. My master occupied the sole chair in this barely furnished room. Silence fell between us. The distance of time passage between him and I was far longer than the five-meters gap separating our physical bodies. Come on, not that complex to figure out.

          “Very bold of you to judge what you see of Nero here in Chaldea is… 'truth',” I could see it from his dark eyes my response was far from what he expected. “We have servants who materialized from pure fictions - literatures, myths, somebody's imaginations… so how can you be so certain this Nero we see is completely NOT influenced by what impression, perhaps lies, historians passed down to general population for centuries?”

          Being an 'extra' master among those Chaldea managed to lately freed from dimensional pocket, this Siberian shaman's descendant exhibited a lack of clear situation awareness. The Arthurian bunch was a prime example of being historically unreal. 

          “I advise you to keep your mind open.” Because he would be in for much more surprises, a shocking discovery even. To today, neither Yaroslav nor Mstislav grasped of the reason I took the Avenger class. Well… maybe everything would hit them, included this unsuspecting master we shared also, when the 'other me' answered to the call through Chaldea's summoning system. However, they'd have a ridiculously brief window of time to get a glimpse of that 'cancer' before I put an end to it. This Avenger form was a direct responsibility to deal with that…

          My 'fake' other self that Christians clung to for eternity, to the point it almost erased my true identity.

          “So you're… telling me that history isn't always true… because we only know through what filter historians put on the texts from the beginning.” Coupled that naively contemplating speech with his small statue, he actually fooled my eyes with a 'childish' filter, per his own words. “But the version in LAPLACE is always correct, right?”

          I wished. My lips stayed sealed, though. There were so many frauds of a historian throughout the era of Roman Empire alone. Despite reigning as an emperor myself, I couldn't discern all the false reality passed through the history I learned of my own state. To lessen my master's hardship in understanding these manipulated impressions, it best if I went with an example he'd be more familiar with. “What do you say about…” his tiny eyes widened at the name I pronounced next. “Svyatopolk the Accursed?”

          He never guessed I was aware of that name. Having to put up with two servants who lived in the same period and were brothers with that person, I heard this name often enough. Moreso because it raised chaos between the Rurikid caster and rider countless time.

          “The madman of Yaroslav and Mstislav's generation?”

          He then went quiet for a prolonged period when I pressed, “And what reason you're confident he's indeed mad? Not that it was Yaroslav's smear campaign to paint his opponent as evil?” All because this young man should very well realize how crooked that caster is capable for.

          “There’s only one difference between heroes and mad men. It’s whether they win or lose.” A small pause to let those words sank into my master. “If Svyatopolk was victorious, you might have learnt about Yaroslav as an unstable, obsessive patricidal loose cannon instead of 'the Wise'. Meanwhile, Svyatopolk himself might even be 'the Great'? These epithets are either self-bestowed or a method to suck up for favors by supporters anyway.”

          The look on his face was one of a person who got told what fundamental his life led until now was a lie. Unlike nowadays where everyone possessed the knowledge of scripts, back in those years when both I and the Rurik brood lived, it was a limited privilege only selective few had access to. The 'truth' could be with a person who held no access to such a skill, thus truth died with them. After peering at me for some time, the master hailed from the coldest land in northern hemisphere signaled he was ready to leave after taking refuge in my domain during the past half an hour. Which meant time to accompany him down to the second floor where his room located.

          Our trip downstairs was quick, with my master whose birth name was almost unpronounceable deep in thought. He needed to be. For we never had a method to reject a servant when they emerged through the summoning system. 


          Alas, this lecture became a prophecy months later…


          "I'm gonna smack you if we run out of sugar!"

Mr. Shrimp PicklePantry

     It was a stressful day in the kitchen, and if Mr. Shrimp could sweat, he'd be sweating buckets. Tough days weren't uncommon at the castle, especially after the king arrived-- not because of the king himself, but because of his lover. The other king, Revere, was a picky man that enjoyed only the finest things life could give him. So when a brat like that was handed the keys to a kingdom, and several personal chefs willing to make anything and everything he wanted, tough days were inevitable.
     King Revere seemed to be aware of this fact, too, yet held little-to-no empathy for the staff. He'd always make the most ridiculous of requests, some he wouldn't even want to eat! All for the sake of knowing that it would be done for him without question. And King Balthazar was too in love with him to tell him to relax.
     Today's order was a fancy dessert, one that was rarely made. In fact, it was so fancy that Mr. Shrimp couldn't quite remember the name. Any time he tried, he'd instantly think of all the ingredients and all the steps that went into it until the stress caused him to shake it from his mind. He zipped and zoomed throughout the entire kitchen, weaving around staff to examine their work as he barked orders left-and-right. You'd think he was catering for a ball or a gala!
     "What is this?!" snapped the head chef as he floated angrily in front of a terrified chef. "This icing is far, far, far too sugary! It'll taint the entire piece if we put this on it! How much sugar did you use?!" When given his answer, the shrimp floated backwards in shock before flying closer to the trembling chef. "Don't EVER use that much again, do you hear me?! Make this again, and so help me, I'm going to smack you if we run out of sugar for this!"


"It's my fault, isn't it...?" or "This is perfect!"

Oculus Troops21

Claim,I might do this tomorrow.


Oculus had sat down reading a book,"People have been known to create cool artifacts? Hmmmm? What if I tried to make my own?" They said to themselves. Multiple ideas would flash onto their head. Now if only if they knew what or how to make them. Oculus would begin going into their pocket dimension for items. "Good thing so much junk can be repurposed!"Oculus exclaimed throwing out dangerous items. They brought out what seemed to be a large crystal,"Lets create something neat!"
There was a lot of time wasted. No eating,drinking or sleeping. Just throwing out whatever fits for a special item. They began to use their crystal claws to tinker and tamper with materials and magic along with using pieces of failed things. "Great! I can't even get anything created!"Oculus complained and checked in their pocket dimension and pile of broken items. They would look for anything interesting but it all was trash. The cloaked entity stared at the pocket dimension and pile of worn out items and said, "It's my fault, isn't it?"


"I am sickened but curious".

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