✒️ Post your written line you really like

Posted 6 years, 9 months ago (Edited 6 years, 8 months ago) by Caine

I have no idea how fast this thread will die considering majority of the people here are artists rather than writers, but it probably won't hurt trying!

The idea of this game are very simple: Post a line (or a few) from your writing project, whether it's a novel, short story or OC bio / background detailing! 
It can be something you're really proud of or something you simply like, or just want to share with other people! Feel free to also tell others a bit about the context if you feel like it

Rules & guidelines:

  • Keep them PG13 max! Let's keep this game something everyone can participate to and read without fear! 
  • Sensitive content should be either blacked out like this THIS or under spoiler. Again, make sure it's PG13 max!
  • No fanfiction lines unless they contain an original character of yours in the line(s) you post!
  • Don't double post. Double posting is allowed! Otherwise this thread will die lmao 
  • You're allowed to post longer chunks of text too, but keep it moderate and put it under spoiler tag so people don't need to scroll through all of it to reach the next post!
  • Feel free to post as IC if your story line is related to a character you have!
Also, here is a general thread for writers if you want to hang out with others or talk about your projects! And if you have anything to ask, feel free to ping or dm me! 
sardine

From a commission I'm working on for someone (involving a vampire character)


"There was a particular noise associated with it. If Daniel was being a little childish and gross, he might have called it slurping. Less like a kid with juice and more like someone with no teeth trying to tackle a piece of grapefruit. Yeah. Like that, but meatier."

Kenmai

He decided to just grab the first set of things he saw, thankfully not a onesie. He simply threw on some gray sweatpants and some kind of shirt with an obscure anime reference because he’d lost control of his life. He was tired alright, and life seemed to constantly want to make him mess up in front of his crush especially. Everything was a mess.

this still makes me laugh^

iouquie

From Yuki's Pun Session:


Points at the ceiling  - "I MAY BE CON- CEILING SOMETHING THAT I SHOULD REVEAL NOW" Yuki pulls a small booklet from his pocket that reads "BEST PUNS >:3c" - "I may be over BOOKED writing this book but nothing bad can hapPUN with this haha !"

hedgemaze

From "Heaven":


Thousands of musicians had lived and died and bled and cried and all of their life's work was around her in one unassuming room with tan carpeting and a drop ceiling.

RadiantRaindragon

Small section from my five-chapter story The Young King (the first chapter of which can be read here):


The female dragon backed up rapidly from this terrible creature, only stopping when she felt her tail hit the rough bark of a tree-trunk. Unconsciously, she reached out to grasp her sleeping son – he was so tiny – and pull him into her chest for safety. 'N-no,' she whispered. 'I don't care about tradition... I don't care about the Tribe. I only want him to live a happy life. I will not condemn him to suffer what you have suffered through your whole life.'

He halted, but did not move away from her. 'You know that I will not allow you and your son to leave my sight,' he said matter-of-factly.

'Yes. You will never stop pursuing us until you have him.'

'Will you give him up now?'

'Never, my King.'

The clouds had covered the moon by then, hiding the glorious whiteness from her view, and she was grateful that she could not see the black dragon clearly as he leapt forwards to attack.

Erandia

Pretty much my favorite part of this drabble ahHAHA
Part of Adventures in Askr in the chapter titled: It's Never Too Old For Good 'Ol Rick Astley:

"Alright, is this close enou--" Gold was cut off from a distinctly familiar music suddenly playing through Erandia's Breidablik. Pink worried eyes soon morphed into surprise, realization, and pure deadpan.

"We're no strangers to love~ You know the rules and so do I--"

Gold stood up and started walking away from the still laughing Erandia, realizing that she just got Rick-fricking-Rolled at 2018.

zinnia

“Oh thank goodness… because I was gonna say, she’s kinda cute.” Emmy replied.

“OH! OH MY GOD! You’re literally a god who just saved the world, and all you care about is cute girls!”

i still need to edit the everloving hell out of this but emmy being a Lesbian is timeless

presented without context

ophanimkei

"Was it possible that I was obsessing over the concept of oddness in order to achieve that level of strangeness? How sad. I'd like to think that there's a deeper reason. Some memory lost in my wave of amnesia. But of course, I wouldn't be able to recall." - Keshet from, Meaningless Thoughts

"Who cares? Life is too short to care about who hates you and who doesn’t. Too many people to care about the opinion of some random people in close proximity to you anyway. If I cared about other people so much, I would've killed myself by now." Mia from, Let's Take A Walk

Chokes, all other good lines are from stuff that I'm too anxious to put online sob

Purnip

"Just keep your head up, work hard, and if you get bored, you can still light this testament up. The vellum is of an interesting quality that burns purple when under a flame. It will provide at least four or five seconds of entertainment." - Quote from Rudy's journal/Will and Testiment.

Gotta add him to my tabletop character collection soon. He's my only real adult.

GLITCH-DXCTOR

“Did you know?”

“Did you know that when deprived of a stabilizing source, a nuclear reactor begins its true final meltdown?”

“You called me toxic. I know I am, and that’s why I am like a nuclear reactor. When deprived of a stabilizer... Water...”

“THEY EXPLODE.”

(Lines introducing Neon Toxin in my WIP script for an upcoming animated series)