Got a few sections from a fic I’m working on between breaks that I particuarly like. Chances are it’s gonna end up heavily edited once I have access to a desktop with WiFi and Drive but I’m gonna show them anyway.
It’s set within my sci-fi headworld after my WW1 OC’s Jasper, William and Friedrich get stuck there.
“You read as very closed off and emotionally unavailable at times. That makes it difficult to read between the lines. I’m not gonna know what you want if you’re not upfront with me,” Oscar keeps his voice firm yet soft. He doesn’t want to hurt Friedrich further but gets the impression he’s done so anyway. Friedrich looks like a wounded dog. After what he’s been through and considering he’s still half drugged on a cocktail of pain relief, mild sedative and potent anti-venom Oscar assumes that his emotions are shot and he’s probably feeling pretty sensitive and raw right now.
“Sorry I shouldn’t of been so harsh,” Oscar squeezes Friedrich’s hand again.
“It’s just a lot of the recent upset between you, William and Jasper could of been resolved fast if you boys had just spoken plainly with each other,” Friedrich goes to interject but Oscar cuts him off before he has a chance to open his mouth to talk with a raised hand in a stop gesture.
“Which I know is easier said than done but this 4-way relationship isn’t going to work if you boys don’t talk it out and communicate,” Friedrich slides his eyes away and Oscar gives him a chance to process what’s been said.
I also like this bit which is from the same fic:
“What’s wrong?” William asks. He really means is there something you’re not telling me? Jasper shakes his head and rubs his eyes with his thumb and index finger, a tell William had long ago told him he did often when he was stressed.