✒️ Post your written line you really like

Posted 6 years, 9 months ago (Edited 6 years, 9 months ago) by Caine

I have no idea how fast this thread will die considering majority of the people here are artists rather than writers, but it probably won't hurt trying!

The idea of this game are very simple: Post a line (or a few) from your writing project, whether it's a novel, short story or OC bio / background detailing! 
It can be something you're really proud of or something you simply like, or just want to share with other people! Feel free to also tell others a bit about the context if you feel like it

Rules & guidelines:

  • Keep them PG13 max! Let's keep this game something everyone can participate to and read without fear! 
  • Sensitive content should be either blacked out like this THIS or under spoiler. Again, make sure it's PG13 max!
  • No fanfiction lines unless they contain an original character of yours in the line(s) you post!
  • Don't double post. Double posting is allowed! Otherwise this thread will die lmao 
  • You're allowed to post longer chunks of text too, but keep it moderate and put it under spoiler tag so people don't need to scroll through all of it to reach the next post!
  • Feel free to post as IC if your story line is related to a character you have!
Also, here is a general thread for writers if you want to hang out with others or talk about your projects! And if you have anything to ask, feel free to ping or dm me! 
melodiemori

 I have a lot that I would gladly share but for the sake of length, I'll share only a few. If anyone decides they want to take a peek, please take into consideration the warnings on all of them. 

Probably my favorite line from this story. For context, Caphriel was heavily bullied and nothing was really done about it. Everyone told him to stand up for himself and fight back, and when he did (in the worst way possibly), he fell. Here he is talking to his old piano teacher, Seraphina. 

"Perhaps someone should have tried to do something besides allowing me to fall into the Devil’s arms. But alas, angels will be angels.” 

This one is from this story, an enemies to lovers story. I really REALLY love the interactions between Adara and Loki in this story. Warning for cursing and very brief suggestive implications. 

Good evening, Adara,” His face twisted into a dark smirk, the light from the hallway lighting his face with dangerous flames. “My, what’s wrong dear? Can’t you get up to greet me properly?” Clicking his tongue, he slowly walked into my cell and stood in front of me. Upon craning my neck up to glare at him, he let out a small chuckle. “I suppose I’ll let that one slide. I’m not here to teach you how to greet me, and that’s not why you’re here either. But I’m sure you know that much, you’re not as dim as one might perceive you to be. Now, listen to me very closely and-

Listen to you?” I scoffed, cutting his monologue short. “Why would I ever listen to a fucker like you? A damned king who would never have the power he has now if only his father had seen the warning signs sooner, that’s all you are. Fuck you, I’m never going to listen to a weakling excuse of a ki-” 

Enough!” His voice roared angrily, and his hand grasped my throat tightly with anger. “That is enough of that if you want your precious kingdom to go unscathed.” 

Go on,” I whispered, staring him in the eye. “Harder. I dare you.” His eyes narrowed and I could feel the smirk pulling at the corners of my lips, raising my chin defiantly. There was a lust and an anger behind his smokey eyes, and it felt like forever until he finally tore his eyes away from my face. Slowly his hand slid off of my throat, and he backed away from me with his face pointed to the ground. 

Let me speak, princess,” His voice was strained, and I lowered my face so that he could not see the smirk on my lips. “You wouldn’t want your fragile kingdom to fall all because of you, would you?” 

And how would you do that?” I raised my eyebrows, and he glanced back at me with a dark expression falling over his face. A long moment of silence passed between us, and he stood with his back turned to me and his arms carefully folded. 

Your mother, the queen, is quite fragile isn’t she?” He spoke with his voice low, and upon hearing his words I could feel my heart beginning to thud inside of my chest. “And from the last rumors I heard she’s sick too. She’s just not quite as strong as she normally is.

What are you trying to imply?” I questioned from clenched teeth, yet Loki only laughed. Turning to face me yet again, he bent in front of me and put his thumb under my chin. Forced to look him in the eye, I could feel every muscle in my body becoming tense. He’d gotten so close to me that I could feel the heat that radiated from his body. I caught myself almost enjoying his warmth, sinking in closer as I stared into his deep bronze eyes, reveling in the heat that intertwined between us… 

I jerked my head back quickly, hitting it roughly on the stone wall behind me. A dull, pounding pain immediately followed and I sucked in my breath. Yet Loki didn’t move, still as ever as he watched me with unblinking eyes. I saw his lips twitching as though they wanted to curl, but his expression remained blank and cold.  

This one is from my most recent story, which was actually inspired by a song, and was originally not even supposed to be a story. It started as me simply writing down an immersive daydream that I had and then... getting way too detailed. So it's not my best work but I am in love nonetheless.
For some extra small bit of context, the character speaking (Thymea) is offering to help a homeless girl and her child. 

I can take care of you,” She told her. “I can give you and your child warmth. May you come closer and I can give you a home.” Silence passed between them, skepticism taking over the girls' features. Slowly she shook her head, taking a step away from the strange woman. She couldn’t bring herself to trust her, couldn’t bring herself to follow someone like her. She didn’t want to get hurt, didn’t want her little boy to get hurt. In fact, she would have rather dropped dead and died in that very moment then let herself trust a stranger again. She could not bear the thought of him getting hurt, and she did not need anymore bruises to spot her frail body.

NLG MechanicalHoundz

"Well Tili's a fatass dummy too but....he's also me in a way. You're you, and I like you. You know I do."


(AKA what I think iz my favorite line I've ever written for thiz sappy dummie)

zinnia

And while their memory was still blank, while their feelings were still fuzzy, Abzu began to cry.

(jelly stone)

//

i know its cheesy to post the final line (maybe) but i think it truly encapsulates the 'THAT SHIT HURTED' energy the oneshot has SDFGHJK

creatfran

this is from a draft i have so i can't really share the full thing, but here it is nevertheless. i like the flow of this and how it's pretty hype since it's literally the reveal of the main character's power. i might tween it a bit in a later draft but yeah. pretty epic. btw the character being referred to is brandy

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(She struck a pose, clasping her hands together and pulling them apart to reveal a beautiful surge of light in her palms. It was the result of flawless breathing and controlled blood flow, the manifestation of nearly twelve years of training: 

Her hamon.)


Melissa Moretti Maggie-Wolff

I might not get to eat today. 

Melissa’s first thought also happens to be the first line!

BlueTomoshibi

Context is some obviously disguised military-types came knocking at their hotel room and they were trying to figure out why.


Shouri glanced over at Pacifica. “You got anything you want to tell me?” He queried otter of the group.

“Wha- me?!” Pacifica jumped at the sudden eye of suspicion.
“We've possibly got military after us. Gotta cover our bases.” He laid out.

The surprise quickly wore off and Pacifica recomposed herself. “Not at all. I’m a sheltered city girl and my folks are certainly as clean as they come. Promise!” She asserted. 

melodiemori

I hate to double post when my last post is at the top of this page, but alas I am. Much apologies if I shouldn't.
I recently wrote a story called "The Last Lullaby", inspired by a YouTube comment I saw on a short about trauma dumping your ELA teacher. And thus began my spree of writing depressing stories about cruel, cruel reality. My story is about a lonely princess... I'm sure that you can figure out where this leads with that combined with the title alone.

I just love how impactful this line is, at least to me. I mean, I made my friend cry with this story and this line, so I think I'm doing a good job. Truly, though, I am not quite sure.

"She listened to her tell her one last bedtime story, the final time that the princess would be put to rest, and she fell into her mother’s embrace among the stars."

If anyone is interested in reading the story, here's the collection of all the short stories I have written thus far. I doubt that anyone is truly interested, but I thought I'd link just in case. Do heed the warnings, though, and take care of yourself. 

charmingterror

SO THIS IS LIKE,,,MORE THAN A LINE YEAH BUT THIS IS A RAELLY GOOD PART I WROTE I LIKE IT

"Live happily? Pyromancer, you expect me to live happily in this place? Where I have no power, no army, no nothing. Out there I'm respected, an idol...practically a GOD, Pyromancer. I'm worshiped, I'm praised, I'm valued, the zombies have told me I am their ruler, their king, their overlord. Don't you want to hear that sound? The sound of people telling you that you are their god? The one they turn to?" He lowered his scythe down, grabbing Pyromancer's face with his claws and tilting his head up to face him. "Pyromancer...you can have it all, the world. You can rule beside me if you join me now. I will spare your life if you do, forget the argument, forget anything like that. You are molten. Act like one."

DuxInteritio

Working on learning this site and I love games like these.

Marci leaned forward and pressed his mouth tentatively against Ambrose’s own mouth. He pulled away for a moment then leaned back in as Ambrose wrapped his long arms around Marci’s neck and tangled his fingers in his dark hair. Marci growled in response and leaned in more. Then he yelped as the chair rolled back and he lost his balance, falling to his knees. Ambrose wrapped his arms around Marci to keep him from hitting the ground. Marci stared up into the wide eyes above as he knelt, half in Ambrose’s lap. “Perhaps we should move this to the couch.” Ambrose softly rubbed his fingertips against Marci’s pulse point. “That idea might have merit.”

GODHPPJWoFGAYSHEEP

kjndcjnedfv I just -

Stillness is a trap, and calm is never real. Nothing is real. There is no reality. Only chaos and movement. Brother does not know because he can not see.

Screw it here's the whole thing lol I love it so much. Oh "context" ig Flightrising Necromancer species Goul subspecies insane Swirl-Eyed bb boi thinking about his brother.

Shifting. Everything was- is- constantly shifting. Possibilities. Hundreds, thousands, infinitely many, the possibilities of anything and everything are endless. The future can change with the slightest shift of the present. Due to this constant change, everything should always be considered, and should change almost every passing moment. Reality is never stable or still, and neither should our minds, ideas, or perceptions. Brother thinks this to be false. To be untrustworthy. To be too chaotic. He doesn’t understand. Chaos is the point. The truth. There is no trust without it. Chaos is everything the universe is. He thinks we should be calm. Still. Watch as the world passes and make decisions with plenty of time and patience. He doesn’t get that the slightest bit of time can change it all. Stillness is a trap, and calm is never real. Nothing is real. There is no reality. Only chaos and movement. Brother does not know because he can not see. His view of the world is painfully simple and still. If only he looked further, looked and saw what I can see. But he refuses. He is blinded by pride and judgment. He is blinded by mistrust and disbelief. He thinks I'm insane. That I know nothing of reality. I know far more than he ever could. If he just let me show him the truth of life. If he would just open his eyes and let them start to spin. Then he would know everything as I know it. The stubborn fool. He knows nothing. He’ll never see. Tonight. Tonight I leave him to his doomed fate. I’ll set out to find others. Others who think and see like me. Others who know the truth. He can die alone, in his final moments he’ll know his truth was a lie.