✒️ Post your written line you really like

Posted 6 years, 9 months ago (Edited 6 years, 9 months ago) by Caine

I have no idea how fast this thread will die considering majority of the people here are artists rather than writers, but it probably won't hurt trying!

The idea of this game are very simple: Post a line (or a few) from your writing project, whether it's a novel, short story or OC bio / background detailing! 
It can be something you're really proud of or something you simply like, or just want to share with other people! Feel free to also tell others a bit about the context if you feel like it

Rules & guidelines:

  • Keep them PG13 max! Let's keep this game something everyone can participate to and read without fear! 
  • Sensitive content should be either blacked out like this THIS or under spoiler. Again, make sure it's PG13 max!
  • No fanfiction lines unless they contain an original character of yours in the line(s) you post!
  • Don't double post. Double posting is allowed! Otherwise this thread will die lmao 
  • You're allowed to post longer chunks of text too, but keep it moderate and put it under spoiler tag so people don't need to scroll through all of it to reach the next post!
  • Feel free to post as IC if your story line is related to a character you have!
Also, here is a general thread for writers if you want to hang out with others or talk about your projects! And if you have anything to ask, feel free to ping or dm me! 
moonnhare

Technically it hasn't been written yet, but when one of my antagonists Is Betrayed, he says "I guess we're all monsters in the end, aren't we?" and ugh I can't give too much context for that because spoilers but that line is a REAL kicker when it comes. Makes you say 'no wait you're baby'

Anyways if you want to start uncovering the story behind that line, I have about 40k words of the book published here on TH-- it'll be a full length novel about some dumbass fantasy lesbians saving the world :0

Caine

(Manual modbump)

BlueTomoshibi

Here's a good chunk between Sahji and Shouri which just shows how they interact with each other from my story


CLAP CLAP CLAP

The group looked around at the sudden noise, fearing some kind of attack. However, what they found was more disarming: Sitting on a nearby rock was Sahji, clapping in celebration. “Good work retrieving the Blaze Lyre.” He smiled, hopping down from the rock.

“Sahji you useless fuck! What the fuck happened to that “I’m not a native entity of this world” bullshit you were spouting!?” Shouri barked, hobbling over with Blakki by sheer force of anger alone.

“I haven’t lied to you Shouri. I can explain once we’re back in the shop.”

The group remained silent, all slightly glaring at the sage. Shouri motioned angrily to the group who was in no physical condition to be doing any mountain climbing. “Ah of course. You've always had the power to go back to California.”

Everyone glared at him. “It’s true! You just had to learn it for yourselves!” He told the group.

The glares sharpened. “Alright everyone! Close your eyes, and tap your heels together three times. And think to yourself "There's no place like home; there's no place like home; there's no place like home.””

Silence

“Gimmie your fucking sword Sahji; I got a wish I need granted.” Shouri growled, cracking his knuckles.

The sage lit up, drawing the sword from his robes oblivious to the malice being directed his way. “Yes, yes, of course! What is your wish today?” He smiled, ready to present the End of Desire to the maestro.

“I’m gonna wish for your death.”

Maintaining his smile, Sahji put the sword back in his robes. “Well, I do say, time is of the essence, so let’s get you lot home.”

fettuwuccine

I just think this is funny asffsfgs

"Nothing wrong about it."

"I suppose." Winter's tone heavily suggested that she thought there was something wrong about it.

Ledokol

          Trying to catch up with average daily word count on NaNo. ATM I'm writing Lazarev in the most grueling period of his existence after the collapse of the USSR.

No one in the canteen knew they were about to witness some bizarre showdown. It started with the taller android leaning over the counter, placing his gloved palms firmly flat on the grimy surface in the act of refusing to take the food handed to him. “Please, NO, ma’am. I don’t need that piece of meat. I don’t need that quarter slice of bread. Save those and you should be able to serve another famish man a proper meal instead of wasting them away ‘feeding’ a machine!”

It started from the nearest table to the serving counter. Soon the chain reaction reached even the farther corner, all eyes and attention drawn to the heated exchange between an unlikely pair: a babushka and nuclear-powered, ‘carrier killer’ android.


Not Important milkywaytrain

"It was a place he had been a thousand times before; ten thousand, a hundred thousand, a million; it was somewhere he knew. He knew it well; he knew the streets, the lights, even remembered a few buildings -- it had been decades upon decades since he lived there, but even what had changed remained familiar to him."

the whole story is wild but i love this line. IC as the protag

salida

Not much of a writer but I like this line I have   


Forrest stares for a while and sniffs, his nose runny. “Huh? Really? Uh… you’re not… joking are you?”

Mortimer looks at him dead in the eyes. “When have you ever known me to tell jokes?”

sunnyshrimp

And then, that hatred swelters, and it’s all pointed inward, now. Gami hates himself. He hates this. When faced with his natural enemy, he thinks Sabbath looks rather beautiful. His eyes are half-lidded, swept by lovely, delicate eyelashes. The muscles in his arm flex as he throws Gami’s ancestral weapon to the side, unceremoniously. He’s bored, had his fun. 

Yes, Gami hates himself— he must be delirious too. He had to be. He was no better than whatever this thing was.

“Thank you kindly, Gami.” Sabbath speaks, now, and Gami nearly shouts in surprise. The grotesque thing’s voice is a low croak, hardly loud enough to leave his throat. 

i've been working on a big ol' fight scene between my characters sabbath & gami that i've been pretty happy with o7 i've got a decent chunk of it done, but i can't say i'll ever bring myself to finish it.. but! here's an excerpt from toward the end of the piece that i'm pretty proud of! 

LiminalOverTea

This is a abridged PG-13 excerpt from a Hecerion/Dolysene one-shot I'm working on.

They're not a couple yet. Hec is smitten, but he can't act on it...yet. <_<;

Other characters mentioned: Qevon, Athyrin (the stepbrother)

When  he was well and disgusted by the inebriated antics of his peers,  he glanced to the far edges of the hall, where the servants were  rushing  back and forth between the kitchens and the dining area, ensuring that  plates and cups were never empty. As he watched a woman  leaving the  kitchen with a platter of marmalade tarts, his eyes settled  on the  person she was talking to--a person he was not expecting be  present at  this event.

He was glad to see her, but the sight put him on edge.

You’d best keep that to yourself…

He heard Qevon’s cold, stern tone prickling at the back of his skull.   Words the physician didn’t dare speak directly, but the sentiment was implied, moreso than ever, during their appointments. Hec watched Lyse part from the servant carrying the tarts, her long, dark hair catching the torchlight.

She almost exited the dining hall into the south wing, but then turned her head in his direction, recognizing him almost immediately. She raised a hand at him. He hesitated for a full moment, then raised his right hand in acknowledgment. She began making her way towards him past a group of drunk attendees, tucking her hair behind her ear as she avoided them.

…she’s mine…she’s all I have…

Hec raised the goblet to his lips, finishing off the apple wine. He needed to be calm, to think about things a little less. She was his best friend, and whatever Qevon had to say would never change that. The inconvenient reality of the situation, however, was that she was gradually becoming more than a friend to Hec. He had no idea why it was happening all these years later. Why three decades had to pass before she was the one he wanted.

[...omitted for rating...]


Hec was deeply troubled by this level of obsession that he had never had for anyone else. He worried about it for weeks before his stepbrother cleared it up that he was in love, and not losing his gods-damned mind.

This was what it was like to fall in love? This was the bittersweet agony he had read about time and again in literature, but had brushed off as melodramatic drivel?

[...omitted for triggering themes...]

It was an epiphany he wasn’t sure was to his benefit, especially since the subject of his affections was already romantically involved with his personal physician. He did not need this additional drama in his life!

DreamyPumpkins

Short and sweet.

"Yeah man, we're gettin' WASTED!"

tkettIe

It felt like walking into a field of flowers, surrounded in color and beauty;

Only to realize they were fake, and just as grey as everything else.

… (From: Briefly Conjected, Disconnected)


It's a short little line I wrote many years ago that for some reason has always stuck out to me