Ask the person below for small help with your OC

Posted 6 years, 2 months ago (Edited 5 months, 15 days ago) by hedgemaze

OK, this is hard to word, but the idea of this thread is for all those little questions you want a second opinion on, the kind of thing you might ask a friend. We're all friends here, aren't we? c: For example:

  • "What should I name my character's sword?" (Note that there's already a thread for naming characters)
  • "What kind of familiar should my character have?"
  • "I can't decide whether my character should be a bounty hunter or a pirate, what do you think?"
  • "I'm redesigning my character; do you think they would look better in green or red?"
  • "My character's world is at war with monstrous bugs. Do you think wasp monsters or cockroach monsters would be scarier?"
  • "Does [backstory excerpt] make sense to you?"

Make sense? This isn't the place for huge questions ("please critique my entire centuries-spanning multiverse"), though you can ask a simple question and invite people to talk to you in private about that sort of thing if they're interested. 

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The first person to post can be the first question, but if you'd like to answer one to start off: what's the most annoying possible way to spell the name Riley? Ryleigh? Rilee? You get the idea. I need an Annoying Name.

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Lemurmr IndigoBookwyrm

CaptainCuttlefish he doesn't seem unlikeable to me, especially with the most recent image in his gallery! Though I will admit I had trouble following some of the description. I hope that helps?

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I love this critter's overall shape and simplicity, but that specific shade of blue is a bit pale for my preferences. I'm not sure how to adjust it or whether to add patterns, though -- got any ideas or suggestions?

Response: YESSS Suneater you're right!

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Bucket Fallen-Down

Suneater3162 [awesome user by the way]

You could add more black design elements like Ibis' tattoo's or extend his mane down his back [like around his spikes]

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I have had this character for a while and I have lost any ability to figure out what to do with him. His design isn't bad it just needs a little spice. Any suggestions on how to change/add to his design without doing a complete overhaul would be appreciated ^^

Edit: Thank you! V

 "Arty"/Arthur ChanteRyuutai

SoullessArtOfficial Maybe some skeleton technology on the back that occupies more space than the 3 rib bones (for that either take the ribs of, make them more close to each other and more forward or backward or lower the amount) would make it more appealing and still keep the vibe going. If you don't really vibe with anything from the bones idea, maybe try something that resembles a turtle shell or something that resembles armadillo shells, maybe make the claws slightly bigger as well, so they're more impactful I guess.


so, any suggestion on how to color Arty's clothing? I'm having some trouble.

(BTW the thing painted in green below his hand Is a sheath, it's gonna be brown leather)

And sorry for the humongous watermark, I was originally only going to post on the wip tread to show off, lol.

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v Thank you!!

Quincy Huna18

ChanteRyuutai My advice to you would look at the color wheel that has loads of hues and see what works and what doesn’t with their coat color! Aka color theory to use complimentary colors !

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based on that, I do think that any of these palettes would look nice as clothing because they compliment the blues! 

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Any advice on what style of clothing + colors would look good on Quincy ? The only drawing of  him with him is an AU version of him! (Ignore the ginger haired version of him in his gallery, it’s no longer canon and was just a concept)

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V Thank you!! Sorry for the lack of info I’ve been meaning to putting lil blurb’s of info 😅 

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poicyss

Their long slender body gives me bug vibes! Especially with the colors too, reminds me of the kind that would try to blend in on pale tree bark. A forestry bug makes more sense with the green eyes, too!

If it wasn't so late I'd ask my entomologist friend on more specific bugs, but off the top of my head they give me zelus, weevil, moth or mantis vibes!

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So, I'm currently working on turning one of my very old sonas into a Utau/Diff-SVC bank. If you aren't familiar with that stuff, I'm turning my voice into a character that others can use to sing songs. Neat, right?

Problem is, most Vocaloid and Utau have a first and last name. I have no idea what last name to give her. I've had her for so long I'm not very attached to her old one anymore but giving her my last name would basically be doxxing myself. I don't know where else to start, though. Not all voices even have last names, but "Bow" is so short and simple that I feel like she wouldn't stand out as much. Besides, that's my name, and I'd like a way to differentiate myself from her.

Was thinking of renaming her "Bow AI" but the AI makes her sound like a robot which she is not. Also considered "Bowie", but that's just because it's cute and different. Not sure it'd fit in with the rest of the Utau/Diff-SVC characters being made lol

That was a lot, sorry. Point is, idk what to call her! Any thoughts appreciated :) New suggestions not required either

GalaxicalStarstorm

For last names, you can either pick from: a surname generator, looking up surnames and their meaning and picking one that speaks out to you, or picking the surname based off something that means a lot to you. Like if you enjoy music, the name can be “Bowie Song”. Just an example, idk you all too well so I can’t pick a last name that’d be perfect. It should be personal to you since this is your character

For first names, Bow or Bowie is fine imo. You can find other variations on the name like Bowan. I’d highly recommend search “names that start with bow” or if you want something like rainbow where bow is at the end then “names that end with bow”. Name lists like that tend to produce more unique names if you were looking for something different than bow or bowie.

 I definitely get that feeling of wanting to conform but imo I think it’s perfectly fine if you don’t. I’m not super deep into vocaloid but the ones i’ve seen have primarily japanese names and I don’t think you should try and pick something like that unless you’re japanese since this character represents you and all. I also don’t think it’s mandatory to have a unique name or last name. Flower is popular and that’s the name, flower. (Unless im wrong and flower does have a last name but flower is still incredibly basic as a name)

I wish you luck with whatever you decide and your process! Hopefully this advice helped a bit. 

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Alrighty, my turn for advice asking. I need desperate outfit assistance for some characters (you can pick 1, idc. Whatever gets your creative juices flowing to help me get my creative juices flowing)

https://toyhou.se/11004101.michi-chieko I want a mostly beige/brown suit but idk what colors would look good on him. He’s a nerd but I still want his suit to have a professional vibe. 

https://toyhou.se/11514792.teruko-amaya She’s a chemist and Ive been contemplating about changing her looks because it doesn’t scream chemist. I’m not looking for evil scientist vibes, just a professional look. The cornrows stay, that’s the only thing Im not down to change about her appearance. (And whitewashing which should go without saying but gotta cover my bases) 

https://toyhou.se/11549438.behavioral-analyst-tbn- A behavioral analyst (obviously, the name says it) but idk what symbolism I can include to make it more obvious. Any descriptions about symbolism like patterns, clothes, colors, etc that makes you think of behavior psychology. I’m stumped

pichiicake

SmilishStylish
For Michi - I think either a green or red accent (like a bowtie or belt) would look nice with a beige/brown suit. Green matches with his eyes and red would contrast with his eyes.
For Teruko - When I think of chemists I think of colorful disposable gloves and safety glasses. Putting her cornrows into a ponytail might also help. If you wanted more chemist-y vibes, but are okay with less realism you could give her a chest pocket and add some colorful filled test tubes into it.
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My advice request time! You can pick any one (or more if you want). Also feel free to give suggest removing existing design elements from any of them or give general constructive critique on their designs.

Option #1) https://toyhou.se/19608716.zephyr?key=DXedj6yqwzZq1OL
They're supposed to have artist + steampunk vibes, but their current design doesn't feel  "artist" enough to me. I'd like their outfit look like an artist without making them holding any props in their hands (like holding a paintbrush). Any suggestions are appreciated!

Option #2)  https://toyhou.se/19608703.dahlia#59487686
I want her outfit to look more like a phoenix, but also keep her main color as yellow. I'd appreciate any suggestions for changes to her outfit or additional adornments to give her.

Option #3) https://toyhou.se/19608694.felix
He's supposed to have pirate + cleric vibes, but I'm not sure his design feels very cleric-like. Any suggestions to help that be more apparent while still keeping his pirate-y vibes would be nice!

Option #4) https://toyhou.se/19605817.rhys
I'd like to rename him so that his name doesn't look too close my other OCs. I'm looking for name suggestions that fit the following criteria:

  • Doesn't start with "D", "F", "E", "R",  "T",  or "Z" (which are the same letters as my other OCs)
  • Short and easy-to-pronounce
  • Masculine or gender-neutral
  • Not extremely common (ex: not "Zack" "Greg" "Bob" etc.)
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HardyLark

HydoAmenoLover I went with option 2 because I do enjoy me some gentlemanly and characters who tend towards more formal outfits. I think Grimes already looks pretty good as far as his physical features, it’s just a matter of dressing him in a way that works well. 

One thing that I noticed is that there’s not a lot of contrast between him and his shirt. So one option could be simply change the color of his shirt to give him more visual contrast and something to catch the eye.

Of course, that’s the simple way and I just have to be a little extra ehehe. :3c SO, here’s some items of clothing that I think could spice up his wardrobe! I recommend any more classy looks as far a style.

- Turtlenecks. Wool ones that can go under a nice blazer or dress coat. I think keep them dark in color would work well for him.

-Scarves. These can be black, but if you opt for having his outfit be less saturated, having it be a small splash of color would look awesome!

- Blazers. I think he’d look good in blazers, whether or not paired with any of the above, I think a nice blazer would work well for him! If you go with a dress shirt, I’d also recommend a tie or bow tie to go with the outfit. 

Over all, I think classy, formal street fashion when I see Grimes, so definitely look into researching some of that! Hope this helps though!^^ (think like the outfit below)IMG_9530.jpg


So I’ve been working on redesigning this mask for the undead Au, as well as revamping the outfit to be… more traveler like? Idk how best to describe it. The dilemma I’m having is that, I’m not sure if I should make the mask more bear-like as the original concept a large cat, though I think a bear fits better. Aside from removing the carved scars… because it’s a little cliche to me tbh, what I’m really struggling with is that it looks kinda drab and overtly simple. And while that has its charm, I want it to have a little bit more character to the mask. As for the outfit, it just feels too… eh. It lacks character, cat least relating to who is wearing it. While it’s the point to look inconspicuous, it doesn’t look enough like Illanya, ya know?
either way, any help is appreciated, be it advice or thoughts ahahaha!

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Rai animalchorus

Maybe elaborate on his personality? Like how does he act now? I.e. is he outgoing or antisocial, lawful or chaotic, nice or rude etc.


As for Rai, should they be a villain or not? Like what should their deal be, i just need some ideas.

Ramil 'Dunes' MeowMeow422

animalchorus

Maybe he's a good guy, but when certain things happen he becomes cold and cruel. Eventually not even seeing what is wrong or right. At one point he realises he is becoming exactly what his parents wanted: a monster.

Just my two cents.

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Any ideas on what persona I should go for them? Obviously loves gold/ expensive stuff but...

Any suggestions?

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MeowMeow422

I don't entirely know what you mean by persona (it just reminds me of the game lol) But I think you mean personality. Maybe Ramil likes gold and riches but feels guilt over stealing from others so they just admire it from a far. But if someone drops gold they'll immediately pick it up and not tell them. They're sneaky but not entirely bad, immediately being honest when caught taking gold. 

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Should they be a try hard edgy man or hide their power as they don't want to alarm people?