Random thoughts on the OC above [HIGH EFFORT]

Posted 1 year, 5 months ago (Edited 1 year, 1 month ago) by kirchhoff

I got Zinkyzor’s blessing to remake their random thoughts on the OC above game, except with a higher effort requirement!

This is meant for more in-depth thoughts on others’ characters. If you’d just like some quick fun, go visit the thread without the effort requirement.

RULES:

1. THIS IS A HIGH EFFORT THREAD. Try to go for 5 thoughts AT LEAST! Of course, more is always welcome, but try not to go for any less, especially if the person above you wrote a lot. Try to match the user above’s effort!

2. Avoid simple lines without elaboration— “nice design” doesn’t work for this thread, but “I like this design because X Y and Z” works better. If you’d like to add a few basic thoughts, please have them with higher-effort thoughts! Just a whole bunch of basic lines won’t work— quality over quantity. Reading the profile is required— simply making comments on art or design is NOT enough.

3. As for what the thoughts are, pretty much anything goes. Headcanons, what this character reminds you of, questions you may have, songs you think they’d like… etc.

4. No sexual NSFW. Gory stuff is fine BEHIND A SPOILER— and only if the other user has stated they’re fine with it/it’s just a gory character to begin with.

5. No need to write essays. This is just for thoughts that go into more complex detail, but it doesn’t need to be super duper thoughtful!

6. Cooldown is 2 people. [You] [X] [Y] [You]

7. If you make a claim, please fill it in 12 hours.

8. Once again, this is a HIGH EFFORT THREAD. You may play on the thread without the effort requirement if you aren’t sure you can give out the proper time and care for the user above’s character, but please respect the regulations here.

Of course, feel free to DM me at any time with any concerns about this thread. I'll do my best to moderate it, but I'm not always active on forums.

Mr. Ferrari MarlinBlues

Claim PaxCeasesToExist

Gonna try jotting these on paper before editing my post help 😭

Np- I’m rotating IC in my brain rn but if he’s too boring then anyone in red hook or desora is a-ok

——————-

I genuinely love the use of green in bros deisgn :0 it’s such a lovely shade too. I think it fits him very well

The deisgn overall is amazing, all the colors are so nice and smooth together

Ok July is such a neat and silly nickname for Julian!! 

FREELANCE WRITER I love writer characters, probably because I wanted to be a full time author myself at one point, but oh well. I’d like to read some of his works

He actually feels like a part of the lackadaisy universe- while a lot of fan ocs kind of stick out a little bit, this guy blends in so well, amazing job :)

I wonder if being a getaway driver is awkward at all for him. Idk why but I have a feeling it would be a little strange being one, but that’s probably just me

He seems so baby, not in a weird way. I just wanna give him a lil hug 

-Carrington  is such a nice surname, i might just borrow it for one of my own ocs if you don’t mind lol. I think it pairs nicely with Julian

It says bros not actually a part of any gangs but he’s got all that going on 💀 poor guy

Also quick edit, bro kind of reminds me of a caramel apple for some reason- I don’t really know why :’)

-wonderful oc! Very pleasant profile to read, and I enjoyed giving these thoughts :]

Yukari Tsubaki 10key

claim

- before I read more about his disposition, I was thinking he reminded me of a teacher assistant we had in high school that everyone really loved. came to school one day wearing one of those 'women love me fish fear me' hats but extremely tall. 

- i also think of a teacher who was JUST as inexpressive and 'dull' as Ferrari but also kind of noble and sweet - he was bald and once wore a student's deku wig for the whole day. makes me wonder if Forest would ever pull something completely goofy just to catch his students off guard

- the cancer .. :( Wondering if his students would have brought back baked goods/cards/balloons etc when he returned.

- is he the kind to put on kahoots for his students?

- his cat names are adorable.

- poor kappa..

- just all in all seems like a lovely teacher. one that i would definitely want to have

- I missed the third line when i first ran through this - I wouldn't have expected him to have ever been a jerk at any point?

- very proud of his growth :)

MARK BloodyMarley
  • Just from her icon and her height and stuff. She's so pretty. Oh my goodness. I love the art of her and her Espurr too, gives such nice gentle vibes
    • Aaaaand I read the rest of her bio and those vibes disperse/intensify/neither/both.
  • Oooohhhkay that got dark fast. Was definitely not expecting that, especially not after my initial impression... I wonder why she has so much regret?
  • I mean she did do a very good job with Minmi, at least externally... I wonder if her being a synthetic psychic-type gives her any stronger ability? Enhanced STAB damage perhaps?
    • Frighteningly powerful - ah, there we go. Let's just hope Prof. can keep her child on good behaviour. 
    • Cute critters with unspeakable power trope my beloved
  • Those redacted textboxes are very ominous o.o
  • If she synthesized an entire Pokémon on a whim, she must be really damn genius then
  • I almost never see real years on character birthdates! Do you update her age every time it passes? (Or plan to, seeing as she was only made 4 days ago)
  • Is that your handwriting on that one polaroid image? Your handwriting is so nice
  • Such an interesting character! I don't know much about Johto but I'd be interested to see what you do with her and Minmi in the future. Very big fangame potential

GOODNESS ME OH MY YOU WENT ALL OUT NO RESERVATIONS - just wanted to start off and say i really appreciate the time you put into writing all this and reading his profile!! thank you so much!!

ill reply to some of your questions later skjhkahkf its my bedtime im tired but tysm!

dazey-the-goat

^WELL i’m just really glad you like them really! honestly i was just telling my mind :] if you’re ever looking back to answer these, i’m up to listen about it! i’ve went back to add in a little bit here lol, mostly stuffed i realized i missed and editing incomplete sentences somehow

  • HEY. there’s no such thing as using an oc too much!! i’m not sure why people seem to still care about this, what matters is that you’re having fun with your sillies y’know! so yeah :D
  • *catches the little guy*
  • ohhhhhohoho there are many different profile versions of them!! hehe always nice to see options around. hmmm although, i might read in the full profile just because. the more lore to know the better >:) 
  • i feel like i’ll still be able to butcher that pronounciation help- [that’s just me tho, like how i pronounce “choir”] 
    • editing on this specific thought, mark’s mom did a good job did she
  • this is going to be an interesting dive through it seems! there’s a lot of different aspects to explore right at the beginning! i’ve always loved a good multifaceted character, so :O
  • ahhhh so he has a comedic demeanor, that’s a nice start! i actually didn’t expected anything of sorts at all the first time i clicked this fella, but that’s neat tho.
  • hmmm i’m a bit concern rn about him seeming being a bit passive it seems so far. i mean it’s fine to be a bit more of a follower once in a while! but i’ve seen that in some characters that it’s usually something more behind it, so i’m curious
  • also nice contrast with his engineering/math skills! i don’t see many logicians like who falls for the comedic category, so it’s a nice take really :] 
    • help imagine calling an engineer prodigy stupid tho
  •  ahhh yes, mark's 3 Ms of passion [i just thought it was neat detail they started with m lol]
  • OHHH so this is where the shut-in part comes!! quite surprise someone with such a demeanor happens to be rather solitary. 
  • that "stupidity" seems to still be shown in his more shut-in side lol. i could imagine him doing some dumb stuff during his tinkering.
  • awww he's really sweet at heart :] deep conversations sound really fun with him! and i'm glad that he has a very close friend by his side it seems. but guy's also immortal and i'm scared that'll scar him someday :(
    • HE’S TRYING HIS BEST TO COMFORT <\3 you gotta appreciate that y'know
  • guy’s an onion. guy has layers people.  
  • man, the whole personality is suprisingly really cohesive! intrigued with how you patched up these different aspects of him really, it's just so rare for me to find profiles that explored a lot  :O
  • yeahhh boy!! it's mathin time! that's such a motto woahh :0
  • "No Mark, the waiter taking your order doesn't want to hear a funny joke about a certain body part. No Mark, don't wear the bunny suit to a tour of Casey's college campus. No Mark, it doesn't matter how "cool" you think it is, you're in public, PUT AWAY THE GUN!" THIS IS TOO HILARIOUS HELP- i can imagine the chaos in here. now honestly i wanted to know casey's side on this y'know, like-
  • honestly the psychology section was fun to dig in!! i think the additional parts of these really made it easier to understand his character, and especially a clearer picture on his flaws and strenghts :]
  • ahhh his backstory... so there's a whole lot  of interesting things here! say, how does he feel about his mom? were there other grown-ups that affected him some way or another?
    • i see that the mom question was already answered in the relationship section oop- but it seems that dahlia has the white hair and red eyes... wait is his mom even ”normal”? is she also an anomaly [however it shows she isn't immortal either so...] 
  • out of all memories, the fact that it was discovering his immortality being the worst interests me. but it made sense tho, must've ruined his previous worldview in one way or another
  • how did he even became immortal? he had no idea of it untill 15 years old, and there seems to be no signs about it caused by his mom in some way, so what is it?
  • i suppose he isn't wrong, math is pretty misunderstood at times. it can be fun once you know the rules!
  • WHY IS THE GEOMETRY DASH CENSORED DID I MISSED SOMETHING- :’D
  • the fact that he hates reading so his favorite book is the one with numbers- [i really expected it to be a math/machinery textbook actually lol] but fair enough, nice detail 
  • ohhh... so there is a way to kill him! though, if his whole self melted, does that mean he's completely unconscious forever? 
  • i accdentally skipped the mannerism section oop- 
  • "EMOTIONAL STATE: C A L M" IS IT???/lh
  • mobile toyhouse is giving me a lot of errors rn, so i'm so sorry these took so long to type out!!- but overally he's a nicely developed fella! very fun profile, might tell more thoughts later once i'm home :)
  • heyyyy guess who’s back lol. now i’m no longer on my phone i can continue this woohoooo- okay but as i skim through some parts to refresh my mind, i started wondering, how did others take mark’s anomaly? like, i know woke up fainted with a partially deconstructed power saw, but like how did that affected his social status with the other campers?
  • “Build an even cooler jetpack-artillery turret combo.” best goal ever, so real mark
  • i just saw the moodboard in the deisgn tab and it’s like, so cool?? im inlove with the choice of pictures here :O
  • “Everybody hates math (but Casey). Everybody hates Mark (but Casey).“ the comedy in bio is wonderful just- and also i haven’t mentioned it but it’s fitting with mark’s character i think! knowing that’s he has a comic relief sort of diposition aha
    •  “Also, with great amounts of text come great amounts of really stupid jokes. Be warned; take care.“ i did not read that warning at all but y’know what i enjoyed this all the way through
  • as i’m reading mannerisms, i’m starting to see the link between him and dolls. and i’m starting to feel like dahlia is actually very involved with him being immortal part. the way you wrote this made me wondered if this is someone trying to make “the perfect human being” or something
  • A ROOM FOR GRILLING STOPPPP I CAN'T- but man i wonder what is that room like? a bunch of grills? did he ever tried to grill himself-

np: lucas, creek, or jon would be nice! no preference :] [also you don’t really have to write anything this long dw!]

v that's alright! really do take your time, i wouldn't mind waiting at all :]

Julian ‘July’ Carrington PaxCeasesToExist

Doing Creek :]

- Firstly his design is literally beautiful !! His colors are great and there is so much personality in it just like!! Wonderful design hfuashfsahuiu
- Also his name/??? It sounds so pretty,,,Creek Whitebelle,, His nickname Candytufts is also so silly omg adore fhhausiuhi
- I don't see many chars with allergies !!
- Liking plants is actually really fitting I think!! I can imagine it can be rlly relaxing for him,,,
-  Arranging flowers reminding of his mom is so sweet <:,] hjshjshjs
- Geniunely kind of tempted to try that sandwich arrangement sometime tbh, sound good, very green (if that makes sense)
- He seems so nervous and anxious I feel sorta bad for him, !!
-  The like, design of his bio is so nice and pretty,,,! ! The stamp at the bottom and thelittle like basic info part at the top,,, simple,, and very nice !!
- I wonder what his favorite plants are? Does he like all of them? Is there one type that is specifically really special to him?
- His hair looks hard to keep up with hfuhauisijuhdjiuh looks likekinda thick i>>?? likemaybe even a bit curly,,
- I feel like he would be the type of person that is like really good at vividly describing things down to like the smallest details!
- he has wonderfultaste in style ngl,,great outfits
- I wonder what happened to his mom? How badly did it impact him?What was he like before she (I'm assuming) died?
- overall he is literally such a cool character !! He has a lot of layers and depth, and seems really well developed !! His design and everything is wonderful :D 

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 


tpbm - IC pref or anyone else is fine lol

silket

- first off, i saw him in another thread i think and it was my first time seeing a lackadaisy OC so that's cool!! i haven't personally read it but i've always admired the art
- i always like seeing writer ocs, i feel like they're less common than visual artists and i just think it's neat :0
- the little blurb at the top is interesting. it makes me feel almost bad for him? he seems like he's in over his head
- it's kind of funny that he went from an uneventful childhood to being a getaway driver jsfksdf i hope it pays well
- i love impulsive characters, it's always fun to see where their impulses take them... i'm very impulsive myself so i relate
- i'm glad to hear that he's an empathetic and caring guy, it makes me still feel a bit bad that he's tangled up in this mess of organized crime. he should just be happily writing and doing his thing in a peaceful world
- i appreciate that he's not the kind of guy to pry or get into people's business if they're feeling down. sometimes it can help, but i do think that just being there for someone shows a lot of emotional intelligence
- "July calls basically anything more than a little bit anxeity inducing 'stressful'" - mood, buddy
- i'm very curious what kind of writing he does. fiction? nonfiction? journalism? etc.
- tbh, being in the middle of multiple different factions seems dangerous. it's good that he's not committing to any one group imo, but that seems like it could result in other groups seeing him as an enemy
- i'm also curious what his hobbies are and what he does for fun! i'm sure he's a reader considering his occupation and since the page mentions he likes the mystery and fantasy genres
- i can see why he likes those genres; i imagine he often wants an escape from his stressful situation and reading fanciful stories can provide just that.
- this is such a silly comment but i love his dot eyebrows i think they're so cute
- the fact that he wears the same boots with every outfit somehow makes sense to me. he seems like the kind of guy who would appreciate routine and having the same thing over and over, unfortunately he doesn't get much of that in his life :P
- i'm curious about his personal life and friendships! i wonder whether he has friendly relationships with some of the gang members etc. or whether it's all business


NP: anyone here is fine! :D

This user is not visible to guests.
Farouk weirdocstuff

Doing Kiran !!
 
- first of all, I'm REALLY interested in his character by already reading only the first paragraph/introduction !! I love how Kiran is not that typical cult-leader, charismatic and all that, but rather the exact opposite !! I'm really intrigued by this concept !
- ngl sent shivers down my spine when I read that he has actual prove !! And the fact it's the power of death makes this cult imo so much more efficient and definetly makes up for his lack of charisma / traits of a cult leader !!
- The fact, that Kiran doesn't see his scar as something shameful, rather than a success, is really a refreshing approach to what is so repetive in media with these exact types of wounds at the mouth (which is obviously realistic still, but it makes Kiran much more interesting to see it as "success")
- I'm wondering, even though Kiran cannot die, is he immune to his own touch or - if he wants to - can he decompose himself?
- Furthermore, since he can reverse the decaying process as well (which is, imo, super unique since I haven't seen this somewhere in any media!), what adavantages does it bring? Can he bring dead people back to life like that or just "slow down" a decomposing body if a loved one (eg. a follower of his) is not yet ready to move on?
- also, i LOVE (!!!) how kind-of contradicting (in a good, story-telling way) his backstory and developing story is! yes, he has found the book, yes, he had read it BUT it is said in the world-building, that other people would have succumbed to madness but Kiran not -> but THEN keeping in mind, that Kiran actually seems to does become mad in the process, even though he chose it himself !!
-> also the fact that Kiran does not see himself how his god slowly overpowers him is such an interesting concept! Kiran doing his cult tasks, thinking he is in control because then his god sleeps (but his god actually being able to act despite of being worshipped or not -> since his god took him back to life and healed his deadly wound) but actually Kiran is not free from his gods control !
- I feel like, if his god would ever chose another person, perhaps a successor to Kiran when he is losing his mind more and more (maybe the god cannot see use in Kiran anymore if he turned completely into a puppet, being so focused on himself and his god that he starts even mixing up facts abouthis god?), Kiran would eventually try to ... "ruin" this persons life (think of the worst possible) in an attempt to maintain this control he holds so dear
- ALso i adore that despite having lost the person he used to be, his old true self, it still seems like there is something of this left (even if he does not recognize so himself)
- Im wondering too: What is with his parents? his past friends? His past family? Do they know about him and his cult? Has he tried to recruit them into this himself?
- Personally, I believe, in the situation Kiran currently is, there is not a single friend he ACTUALLY has. Sure , there are people acting like that, acting like a friend, and Kiran maybe falls for this illusion of a friend (something that still keeps him human, despite having almost lost everything a human is and should be) to feel real. To feel not like he has already died
- ANd I also believe, though his wounds have healed, the mortal wounds is not even a scar perhaps, it often hurts A LOT. and there is no pain, no wound to localize, no pain killer that helps against the pain because the pain comes from the influence of his god himself
^ adding to this, Kiran probably then learned to embrace this pain to remind himself of his "humanity" (even though I feel like this person could become a new god himself (if this is posible in your world-building) when he continues like that ...)

(this got messy, hope u can read all that!)

Inked_Wing

little bump :) (just skip me)

Noah Anderson DerpieNerd

Alright! Lets see (Also, Noah has some triggering things in his profile, especially with one character in the bottom but I put warnings there to let you know before you read that part. If you're sensitive to dark things just stick to the top half of his profile) Now onto this Oc

- I really like the whole clock theme for the profile. I know we're talking about ocs but I thought I mention that

-HOLY SHOOT WHY IS HIS BOUNTY SO HIGH?? (bro commits acts against humanity and committed several war crimes 😭)

- Bro really though running away and avoid talking about the past will fix everything, like dude, take some accountability 💀

-HES FROM THE SOUTH GET HIM!! /j

- He's giving burnt out gifted kid vibes (I know he probably studied hard or whatever but I imagine my man is t i r e d 24/7)

- He looks like he can read a whole book or two in the span of a day if he was given that time

- Yeah how he was acting was disgusting but they shouldn't go after his appearance, that's just petty. I would be pissed too if I was him (not saying what he did was justified.)

- Wow, he really decided to be more petty and decided to kill innocent babies just because people called him disgusting.

- He seems really complex and I'm glad he gets character development at the end at least. ( I imagine if people where reading your story they are rooting for him as well to get that character development. Or maybe a lot of people will hate him for the whole murdering dog thing)

-I like his white hair and the steampunk fashion. Not to mention the suns on his boots

-His scars are so cool

-I like the concept of the story so far, honestly keep going!

Void Void_Lizard

- First of all, loving the colors on the design and the page. They work well together

- For someone so young, Noah looks exhausted

- His likes/dislikes/traits give old soul energy, like he's been here and around a long while

- Poor lad's had a rough go of it, no wonder he's a bit standoffish, one hell of a defense mechanism I guess?

- Gives off cat vibes. Makes sense that he likes them and has one (BLACK CATS = BEST CATS)

- Interesting how the only really positive relationship (not counting things like direct family) is Abe. Everyone else seems neutral or bad.

- Those are some comfy cozy outfits right there, peak "staying inside while it rains in the fall" outfits

- Wonder what it would take to make Noah truly happy?

- Overall, the character is a lot more relatable and comfy than I thought they'd be. I was kinda expecting an angry edgelord from a couple little tidbits, but they're a bit easier going.


- Really curious to know more about how his magic works! - Standard fantasy magic, but he uses a mix of necromantic and druidic magic. It's often small stuff like casting wards of protection, minor curses, or combating things like others' curses. He does have straight up attacks, but he rarely needs to defend himself.

- Oh, he enjoys cursed things! I love these too, does he have any belongings that are cursed? I am curious. :O - I'll have to think more on this, but I'm sure he has a handful of cursed items! His species is undead and heavily ties into ghosts and the other side, so something cursed may harm a human/living being, but one of his kind would be unaffected.

- Ohhh, rituals, this is getting even more interesting now, are these rituals related to the dead? Are they a way of comforting them? Or is my interpretation of this part wrong? Sounds very interesting if my interpretation is right and in a way very sweet of him, I truly love all the spooky vibes from this! - You're mostly right about the rituals! A lot of Void's work is to calm the newly deceased, help them accept they are no longer alive, and make peace. Some rituals are for binding and banishing spirits who have grown feral and violent, some are unrelated to the dead and are instead about the wilds. It's also a way of communing with the gods of that world, as it has a pantheon of gods based on element, like fire or nature.

Evelyn MissNobody

I missed playing this, glad I finally have some time and motivation to play again. \0/

Anyway, here are my thoughts on Void:

- First, I LOVEE his name and how, in my personaly interpretation, his name fits his looks so nicely. 

- I always check the galleries first and gosh, he has such an amazing and big collection of art! I especially love this one

- His design is totally my kind of design and just for that I am faving him right now, I truly think it looks very unique and I love his the combo of the wolf skull with the deer antlers! The concept of the antlers with the candles looks so bloody good!

- Had no idea of what carnocervs were so I did my research and it seems it is your own species which makes him even more unique, wow! Amazing job tbh. 

- I love how despite his intimidating looks he is actually a friendly fella!

- Really curious to know more about how his magic works!

- Very interesting choices for the smell, I believe it fits him very well as I can sense some relation to nature when I look at him. 

- I wish I could listen to his playlist but unfortunately I don't have that possibility where I am right now, however, I know a few and omg, I am literally visualizing him on that artwork I said I really liked above and the Pokémon Tower soundtrack playing now. *screams*

- Loveeee the concept of his voice and its copies, it must be a really spooky feeling listening to him talking. 

- Oh, he is your fursona! That's so cool, I could feel he was loved from the start but now I am sure he is very loved and special to you. ♥

- Oh, he enjoys cursed things! I love these too, does he have any belongings that are cursed? I am curious. :O

- So, my senses weren't totally wrong, he seems to have some sort of relation to deep forests, which is basically nature, this just proves how well his overall concept is. 

- Ohhh, rituals, this is getting even more interesting now, are these rituals related to the dead? Are they a way of comforting them? Or is my interpretation of this part wrong? Sounds very interesting if my interpretation is right and in a way very sweet of him, I truly love all the spooky vibes from this!

- Overall a very interesting character with an amazing design and lots of love evolved on his creation!

_________
Edit:

Void_Lizard (not pinging because I am not sure if you are fine with it ^^')

Omg, the ritual concept is even more interesting that what I thought, that sounds really good!  Very nice to know more about him, thank you for answering! :D


weirdocstuff (again, not sure if you are fine with pinging so I didn't xD)

Yes, unfortunately she died to save Reiner, not knowing that he'd get help right after, so she kinda of died in vain and mostly because she is very impulsive, so we can say her impulsiveness killed her. :')
However, I am working on an AU where she survives, gets over Reiner as the years pass by and eventually has a happy ending with Pieck Finger.

And omg, I'm so glad you realized about the ADHD, it was actually intentional, she was never diagnosed considering the world she is part of but she would be in our world, so seeing someone with ADHD recognizing the patterns on her character really made my day, I am always afraid of getting things wrong someway even though I suspect I may have it myself too. ^^'

Enya Channing weirdocstuff

 MissNobody

- First of all, an Attack on Titan OC? Damn, I've never really seen one, especially not on ToyHouse /pos

- My heart sunk when  I saw she sacrificed herself even though it was help and not an enemy :( assuming that was her death since her bio says deceased?

- for me it is super interesting to see that despite being the "enemy", she has great relationships to people like Levi and Sasha

-  I REALLY love her double-nature! I imagine that she can get that same death-stare when someone takes away her best bow or even if one of her friends would talk bad about themselves!

- also Props to Evelyn for knowing good communication! I suppose this is why she has so many good relationships - she knows (or should I say knew) how to communicate well and set boundries!

- also based on her personality, way of thinking and trivia, I really, really get ADHD vibes from her !! I'm pretty sure she has it? (coming from someone who has it :) )

- Her trauma with her parents and the ship is super sad to read and even think about it - especially if you can see based on her character, that this trauma is rather unhealed and has its marks on her... poor girl, she deserved so much better

- NO WAY SHE WAS NEVER ABLE TO CONFESS?? Why are you doing this, this is painful, omg this is so tragic, WHY IS THAT CHARACTER SO TRAGIC

- also adore the (intentional or not) parallel to Eren! Eren started to obsess with titans after the invasion, while Evelyn obsessed with titans UNTIL the invasion! Love it !!

- THE WAGON SCENE. Even though she was a child back then, i feel like this fits her so much, an innocent child being hyperfixiated on titans and not being able to wrap her head around the possible danger - perhaps she didnt even understand death?

- i did not expect the twist with her parents, it gets tragic and tragic!! she cannot catch a break, right? but Evelyn herself is messy, so her story has to be too! awesome storytelling!

- i adore her story and her character development, it was so nice to read!

 Catharsis aspidev

– i saw your OC before and i must say I LOVE the color pallete of them!!! turquoise is one of my fav color and the way you combine it looks MAGICAL

– wait i just read the fact about her hair color this is so creative (im really curious about how it actually worked :0 ) 

– she reminds me genshin impact character (sorry for that) especially gives me diluc vibes!!

– when i look at design my first thought was i "well shes a hunter maybe". 

–then I thought she might be a princess or something. enya looks very graceful despite rough facial features

– the backstory is everything. its aroused feelings of compassion in me. I'm glad she's in the good hands of her boyfriend, who seems to complement her perfectly!

– I MEAN farouka is really CUTE hghfhjhfgkkkgdsfh

– I think she is a strong and purposeful person, despite the fact that she is not sure what she wants from life

– I'm getting deeper and deeper into the story of this character and omg, I'm amazed at how detailed it is. just so you know, I'm going to use a few sentences to describe my OCs. and these writing skill amazes me


(sorry for being so short, I'll add to the thoughts over time)


Axel TheEliBlog

aspidev hello! hope you don't mind me claiming you <3

-There's not much to go off of based on personality, so if these seem a bit more headcanon-y I apologize! First of all, lovely, lovely character. Judging off of appearance alone, I'm getting a seductive femme-fatale but male version kind of vibe. The grey scale is really pleasing on the eyes! Mans looks like he's up to no good.

-I love the way his ref is stylized! You really get a feeling of who he is, and the way you write is so satisfying hello?

-His outfits really empathize some of his character! Getting rich, new-money vibes from him.

-Feminine men yes yes yes feminine men feminine men, also surprised he's kinder than I expected lol, he gave me a bit of a snarky sassy vibe. 

-The art in his gallery tells a story and I love it! Especially in love with the sketch referencing lyrics from that one song in Possibly in Michigan haha, genuinely sick expressions you are capable of pulling off! 

-I wonder if this guy has any major trauma? A lot of his work is incredibly intense and he has eyes that look tired and destructive. Being a pirate and an underground surgeon, he's seen shit go off the rails I can guarantee it. 

-Speaking off underground surgery, I have a feeling this guy is the type to experiment on his patients while they are under. After all, you get what you pay for when dealing with shady underground stuff. He likes seeing how the body reacts to different changes, but of course to avoid seeming suspicious he won't kill his patients off. 

-Being a pirate, he's forced people to walk the plank. 

-He has some kind of bandage around his eye that appears red/bloody, is this from an attack or is it just an aesthetic thing? Being a pirate, there's always an eye that seems to have vanished haha

-He looks broken, genuinely at his wits end but living off sadistic tendencies as a coping mechanism. 

-He's gotten caught before by the law, but my guess is he has the money to bribe cops to stay silent. Hates law enforcement and anything related to it intensely.

-

I JUST SAW THIS AND IM GONNA NEED TO READ THROUGH IT THATS A LOT OF TEXT KRAK BLESS UR SOUL (glad you like him, I will be reading though it to see if there’s any questions I need to answer agagaggagag)