Let not this body be wasted.
would you date a dragon?
howdy folks i wrote a write!! if you enjoy lesbians, dragons, dragons that are actually classified as demons within universe lore, vague backstories, caves, and terrifying magical abilities, you may enjoy this!!
id link to the characters involved but bc i'm so gosh dang lazy when it comes to making refs of people, spending emone on art, and then writing bios neither rochelle nor gerlinde have profiles anywhere... and all their daughter breccia has a super outdated charahub... so uhhh here's their daughter's girlfriend and their daughter's other friend and somehow that's all the rpg hell folks i have here despite it being one of my favorite settings
the inspo behind the story was me writing a big ol' worldbuilding post about demons in rpg hell, and i've been making a lot of worldbuilding posts in general! so i might get off my lazy buns and make some worlds here for me to copypaste said worldbuilding posts since it'd be nice to share them w/ everyone here! i know you guys wanna know all about demon thermophysiology and a bunch of holidays i made up am i right folks
the descriptions of rochelle's voice were fucking awesome holy SHIT!! the one about molten lava really got me good... your stories are awesome! i love the way your characters interact with each other, the clear personalities they all have, and they way you describe them - it's not overdetailed or a slog to get through, it's just the right amount of description to keep interest and enough to let the reader fill in the blanks! i think that's a really hard skill to master, the balance between describing and leaving open, and you nailed it!
also im dying because the lore behind this... is probably fucking awesome... rochelle seems to be sort of revered as a deity of some sort (lemme tell you that reading a bunch of anecdotes about escaping from cults was the perfect thing to read before this) and that seems very fascinating... gods that are "Tangible" are some of my favorite things ever to read about, and rochelle's position (and personality!) suits that role perfectly! especially her opening line, about 'is that what they call me now?' GOD i love it! i love characters who are powerful and old to the point where others spread stories/rumors about them that they either don't know or don't care enough to learn... it sounds like she's had a plethora of nicknames and titles over the years and this just feels like another notch under her belt to her, it seems
i know i'm focusing way more on rochelle than gerlinde (sorry gerlinde) but man rochelle just. left a huge impact on me i suppose and also dragons are awesome
OK I'M RAMBLED ENOUGH TL;DR THIS WAS A VERY GOOD STORY 11/10
6 years, 3 months ago
T-THANK YOU?!?!?! ;__; god!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm glad so much came off the way i wanted it to... and BIG same i love writing about gods and other super powerful beings, especially when they interact with people, big time supreme aesthetic... so this was a lot of fun to write!! i'm glad you liked rochelle so much, too, she's a character i've been working on a lot lately and i'm rly fond of her so it was nice to have the chance to show her off!!
BUT YEAH thank you so much for your kind words im die... probably gonna make some worlds for my stories soon to drop off worldbuilding stuff, and hopefully i'll have the dragon-related one finished today though i dunno bc at this rate it's gonna be twice as long than that dang story... i love building worlds so dang much especially species!!!!!
6 years, 3 months ago
NP AT ALL! Thank you for writing such an awesome story!
IF YOU END UP MAKING THOSE WORLDS I'D LOVE TO HAVE A READ... your works are always so interesting!!
6 years, 3 months ago