wormancer I am... haunted by your work, your imagery... I just read Suit Yourself in the Clothes You'll be Buried In and I don't even know these characters but I'm like... that picture of the emoji being bonked on the head with a hammer.
"I couldn't say what I was scared of, but I was scared enough that I would rather stay there by myself, staring downwards like the sound of the water could wash away my fear. It sometimes came close." WHOA... It sometimes came close... This might be because I interpreted it wrong at first (as in, the water sometimes came physically closer) but it had me thinking about those lines for a couple minutes.
and then at the end, "Jackwell didn't even nod. Beneath her eyes, I had to turn away, begging the water below to grant me peace of mind. For a moment, it was all I could hear, and I hoped it had deafened me to the sound of her footsteps, but then she spoke the last words I would ever hear from her.
"Suit yourself."
And I did."
just struck me, not just in a "OHHHHHH CALLBACK TO THE TITLE" kind of way, but just... the imagery. This person hears only the ocean, but then over the roar of the sea comes that line? I imagined it spoken softly; Jackwell's voice isn't raised at all, but over the white noise on the coast comes this phrase that just feels... deadly. I saw this scene vividly, like I was intruding upon it... also I happen to love short punchy lines, I'm biased but they're good and strong.
I'm 100% rambling but I also read No Doctor, No God, No Miracle. Once again I'm just like... :BONK: The little line in the blurb hooked me, and then it was like... this continuous "oh no oh no..." Like I started with no idea what's going on in this world but right away I wanted to know so much more.
I'm bad at focusing at the best of times, and especially right now, but I really enjoyed your work.
My library is small but here it is! I have some more stuff to upload that I'm just nervous to post because kind of dark content.
WAA WOW I'M GONNA CRY.... this is so nice to read, I read it on my phone at work and was just smiling so hard! I'm so glad that someone not only read my work but enjoyed it! I'm just ;__; I was debating posting a Henrietta follow up, confessions of a crappy nun and this makes me feel like "someone out there actually likes these characters" and makes me wanna post it!